Various things from Vago Damitio
I watched them moving and I couldn't figure out why they all kept looking at me. Every day it was the same - they came into the office, they drank coffee, they looked at me, they became slightly unhappy and then...they went about their business. All kinds of business, making copies, talking on the phone, faxing, writing in ledgers, dealing with customers, filling out TPS reports in triplicate and all the while, there was someone looking at me...they would do it furtively as if the sight of my face made them nervous...
Another writing prompt from Nina Pelletier on Google+ - Meeting a Vampire - https://plus.google.com/117611181638655435522/posts/6bQZJwFJdCX "Whoa man, you must be a Taurus with all that stressed out energy..." the kid speaking to me was probably twenty and his dreadlocks and filthy jeans told me exactly what he was - a dirty hippie.I tried to ignore him but he was like a fly on shit. No shaking him. He was an unflushable floater and there was no way I was getting him out of my bowl. I knew it right away, but...
Here is Chapter 2 of Book 2 of my apocalyptic novel The Hu Factor:If you'd like to purchase the complete novel, you can get a PDF copy at http://garden.vagobond.com/purchase-the-hu-factor/ - also you will find the chapters I am publishing here at G+ archived at http://vagobond.posterous.com Chapter 2 Ever since she had been a young child, she had hated opening her eyes and the work that the real world would then demand of her. As a little girl, opening her eyes meant getting dressed, heading to the barn, feeding...
I penned this from a writing prompt by +Nina Pelletier but figured all the Bransonites might get a kick out of it too...for more great death conversations check out the prompt at https://plus.google.com/u/0/117611181638655435522/posts/dgDYa8XkGnVTwisting Pain I felt the knife go in. It went deep and it went true. Time seemed to slow down and then the blood started to flow. Somehow, I smiled even as the knife was twisted. The pain must have been horrible - judging by the screams that were coming out of his mouth...
Foot Licking Good - A Collaborative Element Story by Vago Damitio(Collaborative element stories are stories I write based on elements provided by Google+ users - to participate - just watch for my next request for elements) “Rat-a-tat -tat would love to know what you are looking at?” In fact it was hard not to look but the truth is I wasn't looking at the large stuffed rattlesnake with diamond eyes. Instead I was looking at something that was far more bizarre and far less appealing though when combined with the...
The Hu Factor - Book 2 Chapter 1Here is the next installment. If I am posting these too slow for you, you can buy the entire manuscript as a pdf from me at http://garden.vagobond.com/purchase-the-hu-factor/And I am archiving the chapters at http://vagobond.posterous.com Please share this, plus one it, and help me to find an agent and a publisher so that I can feel good about continuing the series...and feed my family while I do it. Who knows maybe Syfy will even make a series of it that survives longer than one season...
The Hu Factor Book 1 chapter 8Here is the next installment. If I am posting these too slow for you, you can buy the entire manuscript as a pdf from me at http://garden.vagobond.com/purchase-the-hu-factor/And I am archiving the chapters at http://vagobond.posterous.com Please share this, plus one it, and help me to find an agent and a publisher so that I can feel good about continuing the series...and feed my family while I do it. Who knows maybe Syfy will even make a series of it that survives longer than one season...
L33t - a collaborative element story by Vago DamitioPlease +1 and share with your circles so that we can get more interaction on the next story. Okay...technically it's a new day so I'm going to post the next daily collaborative element story. It was too fun to wait, so I wrote it now instead of later. Here is the thread where the elements were provided...https://plus.google.com/110404902994335579225/posts/PUpQ98v9YK5 And all of the collaborative element stories so far can be found at http://posterous.vagobond.com...
A Study in Grey, White, and Red - A collaborative element story by Vago Damitio(To read previous stories go to http://vagobond.posterous.com and to take part in new ones stay tuned for my posts asking for elements here on Google+) “What do you think you are doing?” Rafael hadn't seen her come back into the office. He had been....occupied. He dropped the shoe from his face back to the floor but the feelings it had stirred in him were anything but lowered. He had to get out of here. “Why were you smelling my shoes...
The Hu Factor Book 1Here is the next installment. If I am posting these too slow for you, you can buy the entire manuscript as a pdf from me at http://garden.vagobond.com/purchase-the-hu-factor/And I am archiving the chapters at http://vagobond.posterous.com Please share this, plus one it, and help me to find an agent and a publisher so that I can feel good about continuing the series...and feed my family while I do it. Who knows maybe Syfy will even make a series of it that survives longer than one season. As always...
Here is the next installment. If I am posting these too slow for you, you can buy the entire manuscript as a pdf from me at http://garden.vagobond.com/purchase-the-hu-factor/And I am archiving the chapters at http://vagobond.posterous.com Please share this, plus one it, and help me to find an agent and a publisher so that I can feel good about continuing the series...and feed my family while I do it. Who knows maybe Syfy will even make a series of it that survives longer than one season. As always...I strongly encourage...
Book 1 Chapter 5Here is the next installment. If I am posting these too slow for you, you can buy the entire manuscript as a pdf from me at http://garden.vagobond.com/purchase-the-hu-factor/ And I am archiving the chapters at http://vagobond.posterous.com Please share this, plus one it, and help me to find an agent and a publisher so that I can feel good about continuing the series...and feed my family while I do it. Who knows maybe Syfy will even make a series of it that survives longer than one season. As always...
Here is the collective story created from your elements.....read this and the last one at http://vagobond.posterous.comElements provided by google plussers at this thread https://plus.google.com/u/0/110404902994335579225/posts/65gQd5QdFY6 Chicken Liver Vanilla The light gravity of the moon had strange effects on the first families to settle there. First, they unexpectedly began to live much longer than the Terran bound humans below them. That was why at the age of 44, Deborah Cartimore was treated like a teenager...
The Hu Factor - Book 1 chapter 4Here is the next installment. If I am posting these too slow for you, you can buy the entire manuscript as a pdf from me at http://garden.vagobond.com/purchase-the-hu-factor/ And I am archiving the chapters at http://vagobond.posterous.com Please share this, plus one it, and help me to find an agent and a publisher so that I can feel good about continuing the series...and feed my family while I do it. Who knows maybe Syfy will even make a series of it that survives longer than...
For those of you who are enjoying my chapter by chapter postings of The Hu Factor but want to be able to read the manuscript faster, you can purchase my completed (but still being revised on your suggestions) manuscript for $7 at http://garden.vagobond.com/purchase-the-hu-factor/ via plus.google.com
The Hu Factor (tentative title) Book 1 Chapter 3Please leave me as much feedback as you feel comfortable with. Even just "I like it' or 'that character sucks' or 'I want more' As always, I am crossposting at http://vagobond.posterous.com where you can find everything (and will continue to find everything - including some short fiction experiments which come from Google + and more....alright then...Enjoy and any feedback is appreciated as is sharing or recommending for other circles... ~Vago Chapter 3 Ben awoke...
Your Story.....you google plussers provided me with my ten requested elements...here is your story. We'll do another one soon...“Septimous!” the shrill voice rang out coldly on the Amsterdam streets. There was no chance that he was going to go back. “Where are you Septimous? SEPTIMOUS!” He was done with that life. He liked it just fine where he was now. She had always found him before but this time he wasn't going to let it happen. All he wanted to do was play with Megaman and every time the action started getting...
Hu Factor Book 1 (feedback please!) See the rest at http://vagobond.posterous.comChapter 2 He had never before experienced that bizarre but clichéd slowing down of time. One moment he was pushing his glasses up his nose and thinking about how nice dinner and a romp in the hay with his French mistress would be, then he became aware of the rafters coming towards him. It seemed like they took minutes but was more likely only a few seconds. He actually felt a moment’s concern for the machinery around him, the...